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pg 4: "Mafufu can't be the the only one this happens to!" that sentence needs fixing.
Why? What do you think is wrong with it?
you say "the" twice. also the sentence sounds weird. It should say, "Mafufu cant be the only one that this happens to!" or something like that.
Oh, you're right. I'll get on that.
Thanks for the chapter.
Thanks!
pg 4: "Mafufu can't be the the only one this happens to!" that sentence needs fixing.
ReplyDeleteWhy? What do you think is wrong with it?
Deleteyou say "the" twice. also the sentence sounds weird. It should say, "Mafufu cant be the only one that this happens to!" or something like that.
DeleteOh, you're right. I'll get on that.
DeleteThanks for the chapter.
ReplyDeleteThanks!
ReplyDelete