Sunday, June 1, 2014

Shinohayu Chapter 9: Hayari 2 (V2)

If I could have one wish granted, it would be to annihilate all color redraws.

V2: Fixed a typo on page 4. Thanks, Mutopis.

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6 comments:

  1. pg 4: "Mafufu can't be the the only one this happens to!" that sentence needs fixing.

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    1. Why? What do you think is wrong with it?

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    2. you say "the" twice. also the sentence sounds weird. It should say, "Mafufu cant be the only one that this happens to!" or something like that.

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    3. Oh, you're right. I'll get on that.

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